The O.R.I.G.E.M. Chronicles

Chp. 2 Pg. 10

Date Posted: August 10th, 2017, 6:35 pm

Author Notes

I feel like a sketchy motel would be even worse after the night Sophie has had..

Comments

She thinks about this just now? That looks like Bates Motel, you know the one from Hitcock's Psycho.
@maeriyong: Sophie is definitely the type to act first think later haha, and it totally does look like that! xD
can't really blame her, after the adrenaline rush, your senses go a little off and now they get back to normal and she thinks wow, maybe this wasn't such a good idea... If there were even more shadows then you'd have an even creepier setting *_*
(proofreading is important - money :P)
@di-chan: very true! and thanks, it's now fixed! It's amazing how I can read these pages over 5 or 6 times and still have something slip by.
Totally understand you, when I wrote fanfics it was like that too, I ended up getting one habit, proofing after finishing, and then again the next day, I found it better to detect mistakes after one night sleep since I'm not a native English speaker :)